Often in life you
Smile, altough your heart feels like breaking..
Smile, altough you are hurt inside..
Smile, altough you feel like crying your lungs out..
Smile, with a lump in your throat that even loved ones don't notice..
And then you wish all your tears turned into Frozen ice, Frozen tears!!
15 comments:
really touching one
venkat
Dhanyechi,
I can feel it when I read it... It's poured down from your heart... Really nice
@ Venkat: Thank you Venkat n welcome to my blog :)
@Smitha: Thank you.. ithokke ente oru number alle ;)
Yes, I knew its right from ur heart..Nice one.
really well written...
y frozen?
tears break you and make you
like time, "move on" is the key. frozen is not natural.
@ Resma : Thank you :)
@ Sajin : Thank you.. Yep I know frozen not natural.. that's why you wish it to be like that so that no one realises you have tears in ur eyes ;)
Beautiful words...
hmmm...
frozen tears have their place;
they cover the scar on ur face...
n you move on like nothing happened...
little does the world know that the feel remains!
simple and ethereal...thats is how your piece is..
@ Richy: Oh God.. Richy, I'm perfectly hail n healthy.. People reading your comment will think this is a result of some love failures!!!!
And do you think I will allow anything to hurt me?? This was just a work of fiction..
@ Sini : Thank you :)
@ Madhurima : Thank you Madhu. Nice to get such comments from a poet like you :)
Ok ok ..
I take back my words [:D]
@ Richy : Good boy :)
hey why frozen tears ?
when u smile, it should be a smile from inside you.
@ Jeseem: That is when you are happy n smiling not when u r sad n u want to hide it ;)
good one..!!but i think the person shuld be in artic region..!!jus kiddng
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